Horror poem that I wrote... with an alternate ending.

[Scott C4/5]

Awesome!

Thanks! I recently submitted it to a poetry magazine and if they publish it I will get 10 bucks a line. Something like $2740 if I'm lucky. I didn't submit the alternate ending and I changed a few words here and there. I wasn't supposed to submit it if I had published it anywhere else so i removed it from Facebook. I totally forgot that I had shared it here but I think its safe to leave it... I doubt they will find it here.

[nauticalmike]

Awesome!

[Scott C4/5]

Great work.

Thanks Alan...

[alan]

Great work.

[Scott C4/5]

My all time favorite movie.
And great job, Scott.

Thanks, Crappler...

[Crappler]

as was said in Braveheart, "Every man dies. Not every man really lives."

My all time favorite movie.
And great job, Scott.

[Scott C4/5]

Mombo, thanks...


Rook98006, as was said in Braveheart, "Every man dies. Not every man really lives."

[Rook98006]

I like you mastered your fear, but sad you died.

[Mombo]

Excellent!

[Scott C4/5]

That was excellent! It could be written in short story format, too. I like the first ending because it was real, and not a dream like the second ending implies. You should send it out to publishers, there are many online.

These guys send out a lot of writing contests and gigs that pay money. They have a lot of info to help writers succeed. They have never charged a single dime, it's all free. Good luck man, that was a great read

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I found a place online that will pay by the line and or page (if they publish) and was going to send it to them with the first ending but I re-wrote a couple lines and was trying to get a hold of my high school creative writing teacher to get her feedback before I do. Being OCD I tend to go back over it and second guess myself. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the info.

I like to write in rhyme and verse... it tends to not let me wander. lol

[rdf]

That was excellent! It could be written in short story format, too. I like the first ending because it was real, and not a dream like the second ending implies. You should send it out to publishers, there are many online.

These guys send out a lot of writing contests and gigs that pay money. They have a lot of info to help writers succeed. They have never charged a single dime, it's all free. Good luck man, that was a great read

http://www.freedomwithwriting.com/

[Scott C4/5]

Please let me know which ending you prefer...

[Scott C4/5]

Thanks, triumph and Gearhead...

[Gearhead]

Alfred Hitchcock like. Nice read.

[triumph]

Nice work!