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Horror poem that I wrote... with an alternate ending.

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  • Scott C4/5
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    Originally posted by nauticalmike View Post
    Awesome!
    Thanks! I recently submitted it to a poetry magazine and if they publish it I will get 10 bucks a line. Something like $2740 if I'm lucky. I didn't submit the alternate ending and I changed a few words here and there. I wasn't supposed to submit it if I had published it anywhere else so i removed it from Facebook. I totally forgot that I had shared it here but I think its safe to leave it... I doubt they will find it here.

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  • nauticalmike
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    Awesome!

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  • Scott C4/5
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    Originally posted by alan View Post
    Great work.
    Thanks Alan...

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  • alan
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    Great work.

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  • Scott C4/5
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    Originally posted by Crappler View Post
    My all time favorite movie.
    And great job, Scott.
    Thanks, Crappler...

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  • Crappler
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    Originally posted by Scott C4/5 View Post
    as was said in Braveheart, "Every man dies. Not every man really lives."
    My all time favorite movie.
    And great job, Scott.

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  • Scott C4/5
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    Mombo, thanks...


    Rook98006, as was said in Braveheart, "Every man dies. Not every man really lives."

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  • Rook98006
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    I like you mastered your fear, but sad you died.

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  • Mombo
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    Excellent!

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  • Scott C4/5
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    Originally posted by rdf View Post
    That was excellent! It could be written in short story format, too. I like the first ending because it was real, and not a dream like the second ending implies. You should send it out to publishers, there are many online.

    These guys send out a lot of writing contests and gigs that pay money. They have a lot of info to help writers succeed. They have never charged a single dime, it's all free. Good luck man, that was a great read

    http://www.freedomwithwriting.com/
    I found a place online that will pay by the line and or page (if they publish) and was going to send it to them with the first ending but I re-wrote a couple lines and was trying to get a hold of my high school creative writing teacher to get her feedback before I do. Being OCD I tend to go back over it and second guess myself. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the info.

    I like to write in rhyme and verse... it tends to not let me wander. lol

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  • rdf
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    That was excellent! It could be written in short story format, too. I like the first ending because it was real, and not a dream like the second ending implies. You should send it out to publishers, there are many online.

    These guys send out a lot of writing contests and gigs that pay money. They have a lot of info to help writers succeed. They have never charged a single dime, it's all free. Good luck man, that was a great read

    http://www.freedomwithwriting.com/

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  • Scott C4/5
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    Please let me know which ending you prefer...

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  • Scott C4/5
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    Thanks, triumph and Gearhead...

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  • Gearhead
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    Alfred Hitchcock like. Nice read.

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  • triumph
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    Nice work!

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